The Weight of Our World has reached more than one-hundred thousand words and has only had one official read through. Given this, I am more than justified in my belief that there are multiple spelling errors, grammatical mistakes and many, many sentences and words that make little to no sense.
If there is anyone out there looking for some applicable experience in proofreading or simply would like to read a science fiction story whilst paying close attention to the details, the please go and take a look. Likewise, I am lacking in any kind of substantial feedback, so it would be very beneficial to find out what people think of the storyline thus far.
You can find it on Wattpad, here on WordPress and on Surgebook. I recommend using Wattpad as there is a feature that allows you to comment throughout the pages, on sentences and paragraphs.
Please and Thank you in advance.